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Today Today in the moring l went to library to read book about :sculpture yeah l like design , in the afternoon l teach children to draw pictures. they are very sweet and cute haha they are drawing owl and tree 。l want to go abroad one day .so try hard .

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Today, in the morning, l went to the the library to read a book about sculpture. yeah l really like design. In the afternoon, l taught children how to draw pictures. They are very sweet and cute, haha. They drew owls and trees. l want to go abroad one day, so I will try work hard for it.

 

Tips:


- Yeah and haha are not mistakes but they are not formal. They can be normally used in informal texts.


- When you start another phrase after a dot ( . ), you must use capital letter.


     Ex.: "They are very sweet and cute, haha. They drew owls and trees."     - Right

           "They are very sweet and cute, haha. they drew owls and trees."      - Wrong


- After a dot ( . ) and a comma ( , ), you must write like this:


     Ex.: "They are very sweet and cute, haha."                         - Right

           "They (...) cute , haha." or "They (...) cute ,haha."         - Wrong

 

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