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A letter to a tutor in a university of Australia. Please help me rewrite it, thank you ! Dear Ms Sue Lim, Hello, this is Zhe Cong from Dalian, China. I greatly appreciate your constant support and guidance. Actually I think I have some difficulties with accepting the offer. I am going to study for a master course in the University of Newcastle. I have already received the offer, and I accept it. I am very eager for the study in Newcastle to begin. But right now, I cannot satisfy some part of the entrance requirement. In fact, I have some problem with handing in my bachelor’s degree certificate and graduation certificate. At this moment, I have certainly passed all the courses and exams of my studying in Dalian Maritime University. I have finished my graduation thesis and graduation oral examination. I have completed all the things in Maritime University, actually I have already graduated, and got a bachelor’s degree. But our school will hand out our graduation certificate to us in Jan 15th 2014, and the bachelor’s degree certificate in July 2014. However, according to the offer, my language course will start at Feb 19th 2014, and I must provide these two certificates. That means maybe I will not be admitted this time. But you know, I eagerly look forward to continue my studies in Newcastle. Right now, I have no course to study and no work to do, so I don’t want to wait anymore, because it is a time wasted. And the only problem is time. I want to entreat a favor of you, dear Ma’am. Could you please postpone the deadline of handing in these two certificates? Would you please grant my entrance without these two certificates temporarily? And I promise I will hand in my graduation certificate before January 20th 2014 and bachelor’s degree certificate before August 2014, otherwise, you can stop my study in Newcastle anytime. I’m 24 years old, and I have no time to waste. Please! Thank you! Yours sincerely Zhe Cong

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