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Where Had Our Russian Winter Gone? Last three days my outside thermometer was showing the temperature below -5 degrees. I was glad, it seemed to me that Lady Russian Winter finally had come to us. But yesterday night when I have looked at this damned thermometer, I became really upset. The thermometer column went up to +2 point. It means dripping water, slush, rime, kissing and embracing cars on streets again. I am afraid, I have to sell quite cheaply my ski and ski suit.

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Where Has Our Russian Winter Gone?

The last three days the outside thermometer had been [1] showing a temperatures below -5 degrees. I was glad; it seemed to me that Lady Russian Winter finally had arrived. But last night when I have looked at the damned thermometer, I became really upset. The mercury in the column [2] went up to +2 degrees. It meant dripping water, slush, rime, and kissing and embracing cars on the streets again. I am afraid, I'll have to sell quite cheaply my skis and ski suit quite cheaply.

 

[1]  The past perfect tense is usually the best choice to indicate an event in the past (the thermometer showed a temperature below -5 degrees) that ended before another event began ("last night" the temperature rose.)

 

[2]  The column doesn't move up or down.  The fluid inside the column moves.  I assume the column is filled with mercury.  If you use something than mercury in the frigid northern clime, I'm unaware of that!

 

 

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I know what you feel! I wanted to play snowballs with my friends,but...all snow has melted. Do not be upset! Real winter will come soon.
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I'd be glad to travel everywhere including Viet Nam. I saw the state "always hot in every season" in Egypt and it was really strange for me. I won't change my North to warm place. I like diversity.
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Sir, you should go to Viet Nam or Thai Lan, always warm every day^^ if I do not want to say" always hot in every season". Snow is a very strange word for us

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