Hey!  Good to see you writing! ^__^

It's funny fun as much as I feel tired. 

This is a very common mistake for people learning English!  

fun = enjoyable

funny = (1) humorous. made you laugh. the punchline to a joke. (2) odd, slightly strange, not what you expected.

Making a kimchi

Last weekend, My family made a kimchi
It's kind of a tradition event in Korea.
Usually all of the/our relatives are gathered and (make) prepare it together.

But Our family including my parents, fitst my big brother's family, second brother and his girlfriend, and me I , made a kimchi togher  together .

The work (is) was really hard, (i mean physically) physically speaking . But It's funny as much as I feel tired.
Because all of us are working together and cheering up for each other.
These days, We can't see each other often. So, through (this time) this occasion , we could can (say "hello" to) spend time with each other.

After making the Kimchi/ After finishing, We have it with boiled pork (it's called a 수육)
It's really delicous!! I can't really explain the tastes of this.. and If you have it with 막걸리 (Korean rice wine).
It's.. unbelievable .. haha :)

*red : correction 

* orange : ulternative options or incoherent sentences 

*blue : i didn't quiet understand what you meant by this " the more you get tired , the more fun it gets " ?

                          잘했어요  \^o^/  화이팅  :D

                          나는 김치를 먹고 싶어 :( 

                          I'll learn how to make it or I'll go to korean very soon :3

                          I hope I was of some help \^o^/ .

Making a kimchi

Last weekend, My family made a kimchi
It's kind of traditional event in Korea.
Usually all of our relatives are gathered and make it together.

But our family including my parents, fitst first brother's family, second brother and his girl friend, and me, made a kimchi together.

The work is really hard, i mean physically. But It's funny as much as I feel tired.
Because all of us work together and cheer each other up.
These days, We can't see each other often. So, through this time, we could say "hello" to each other.

After we're done making it, We have it with boiled pork (it's called a 수육)
It's really delicous!! can't explain tastes of this.. and If you have it with 막걸리 (Korean rice wine).
It's.. unbelievable .. haha :)