my day

Today is my bad day. I awoke up at 9am and I feel cold light. I was lazy and I was thinking about today and also for my future. One of my friend came from Mumbai for his work. He had been living from four days we spent time with him but today he went on for to Mumbai again. He has got a job in Qatar and he will go next month. That's it.

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Good job. Your spelling is very good, you just need to work on capitalization. In English the first letter of the name of a place is capitalized.

In your first sentence you said "today is my bad day". You could say that, but we normally don't in English. Saying "my bad day" you imply that you only have one bad day. We would normally say "I'm having a bad day today" or "today is a bad day".

Also, you said you feel "cold light". That doesn't make sense. You could say:

"I feel a little cold" meaning that you are chilly,

"I feel lightly cold" meaning that you are chilly, or

"I feel a light cold" meaning that you feel a little sick.

Overall, you did very well. Have fun learning English!