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Fiber Art This is my picture 。 do you like it? if you have some advice you can tell me .yeah ,it has spend three weeks to do it .so l try hard .l want to study anything ,stay only there ,so think the word is small . l study Tianjin university of science and technology .wellcome everyone make friend . now l teach children draw pictures on free time and l am a volunteer , free time help people deal with problems . l will take part in the postgraduate entrance exams in2015 。 can you recommend some english books fo me or movie and anything nice day will past . xuehui gan en .

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Fiber Art

 

This is the picture of my art work.  Do you like it? If you have some advice, you can please  tell me. Yeah, it has I have spent three weeks to do it. lt was very hard for me. l want to study anything , if I can stay only t here. ,so

 

I think the word is small. l study am in Tianjin University of Science and Technology. Welcome everyone. make friend . Now l am teaching children how to draw pictures on during my free
time and l am as a volunteer, and free time help people deal how to handle the with problems . l will take part in the postgraduate entrance exams in 2015. Can you recommend some English books,  movie and the other things for me? or movie and anything


Have a nice day. will past . Xuehui gan en,

 

I corrected two kinds of errors without color.

One is capital letters and the other is punction marks.

By correcting these errors, your essay will be improved very much.

 

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your artworks are really awesome!!
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Fiber Art

This is my the picture of my fiber art work. Do you like it? If you have some advice, you can tell me please let me know. Yeah, I spent three weeks to do it. so l try I work hard and l want to study anything, so I only stay here, thinking that the world is small. l study at Tianjin University of Science and Technology. I welcome everyone make to be my friend. Now l teach children how to draw pictures on my free time and l am as a volunteer. (Free time helps people to deal with problems) or (In my free time, I help people to deal with problems). l will take part in the postgraduate entrance exams in 2015. Can you recommend some English books, fo me or movies or and anything any other things for me?
(A nice day will past has passed.) or (Have a nice day.) xuehui gan en .

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