Water shortage
In this essay, I will argue about water shortages. Water is a vital part of life and access to an adequate supply of water is indispensable for every human being. However fresh water is unequally distributed in the world and world population has been grown. In conclusion, there are water poor countries.
Especially according to ‘Population Action International’ (PAI), to our surprise, Korea is one of the countries that lack water. To solve this problem, first, Korean should try to save the water. For instance, the amount of the water per person per day of Korea is close to three times of Germany. Common example, the way of washing dishes between Germany and Korea is totally different. German does not turn on the water while they wash the dishes. Some people think that one of the reasons is cheap water rate. South Korea's water rate is $ 0.77 per 1 ㎥ and the average water rate of OECD was $ 2.63.
Second, the water loss could be also another reason. The huge amount of water lost through leaks in some urban water distribution. This kind of losses is caused by old pipes, valves or storage tanks. The repair works are normally expensive and elaborate in Korea. Also choosing proper methods is difficult. Thus, developing a technical strategy is important to resolve this issue.
To sum up, in many regions, water scarcity is becoming problematic. However from small beginnings came great things. Conserving water on an individual basis and research of technique is required to Korean.
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Water shortage
In this essay, I will argue (I don't think argue is the best word, this is not an argument) talk about water shortages. Water is a vital part of life and access to an adequate supply of water is indispensable for every human being. However, fresh water is continues to be unequally distributed in throughout the world and yet the world population has been continues to grown. In conclusion (In conclusion is normally only used at the end of an essay) There are water poor countries in the world.
Especially According to ‘Population Action International’ (PAI), to our surprise, Korea is one of the countries that lacks water. To solve this problem, first, Koreans should first try to save the water. For instance, the amount of the water per person per day of in Korea is close to three times that of Germany. A common example , the way of washing dishes between Germany and Korea is totally different. German does not turn on the water while they wash the dishes. This becomes clearer when you compare the way Germans wash dishes in comparison to the Koreans. German people do not normally run the water while washing while the Korean people do. Some people think that one of the reasons for this is cheap water rates. South Korea's water rate is $ 0.77 per 1 ㎥ and the average water rate of OECD was $ 2.63.
Second, the Water loss could be also another reason. The A huge amount of water is lost through leaks in some urban water distribution. This kind of losses is caused by old pipes, valves or storage tanks. The repair works are is normally expensive and elaborate in Korea. Also, and choosing proper methods is difficult. Thus, developing a technical strategy is important to resolve this issue.
To sum up, in many regions, water scarcity is becoming problematic. However from small beginnings came come great things. Conserving water on an individual basis and research of techniques is required to for Korean... (it feels like this sentence is incomplete and requires more information added)
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