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Topic: Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have been aware of this problem for a long time. Why do people do so little about it? Give your suggestions on how to solve this problem.

It is universally acknowledged that there is an increasing number of animals as well as plants dying out every year. Little has been done to reverse the tendency, even though people have been realized the seriousness of the problem. In my essay, I will analyze the reasons why individuals do little about the issue and suggest some possible solutions.

One of the main reasons that so little is done is that people would have to change their own lifestyle to protect those endangered animals and plants, such as stop eating the meat of those endangered animals. That is to say, individuals would be required to give up their former lifestyle, since the new lifestyle sometimes brings them inconvenience and lowers their quality of living. Another reason is that a large number of people believe that each person’s power is limited, thus, they can do nothing to change the phenomenon. Also, they think that it is governments' and enterprises’ obligation to prevent animals and plants from dying out, since they have more authority and resources.

To prohibit the trend from getting worse, effective measures must be taken as soon as possible. Firstly, relevant laws and regulations should be instituted by governments. For example, eating precious animals such as whales should be punished. Also, large companies that hunt endangered animals and plants should be banned. Secondly, some incentive policies should be implemented to encourage people to take action - for instance, giving rewards to those people who maintain the biodiversity actively. Last but not least, enhancing citizens’ awareness of protecting other creatures living in the world and boosting their self-confidence is indispensable. Although each person’s strength may not strong enough individually, things can become better and better if all of us try our best to do.

To conclude, everyone ought to put emphasis on the protection of endangered animals and plants. Also, only through governments, enterprises and individuals work together can this problem be solved.

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