Learning English

I began learning English in at New Oriental this afternoon at Guomao campus. My teacher is a young man who got a master's degree from Beijing International Studies University. I recognized (met?) an English partner (fellow student?). She is a pretty girl and who works as a clothes model. She is going to go abroad so she came to learn English. There are many other students, including a manager, a boy who works in CCTV, an employee in a central company (head office?), etc. They would like to study in at/with New Oriental because they need to learn use of it English (quickly?). Some of them want to immigrate emigrate to other countries, some while others want to travel abroad. This is was my first lesson and I studied seriously conscientiously/very hard/intently.

Very good! Your English is excellent.