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The University wants to add a new course. What should this new subject be? Can you help me with the grammar problem? :( According to the research carried out by one newspaper, more than 85 percent of the university students are hope to backpack travel in their early 20s. And actually among that research responder around 46 percents are planning to backpacking travel or they already done it. So ‘Backpacking travel course’ is suited for the University’s new course. Backpacking travel need great physical strength and less money than sightseeing such as cruise travelling. Therefore university students are perfect for the backpacking traveller. ‘Backpacking Travel Course‘ is helpful for the students because of practical and academical reasons. In practical reasons, this class provide real information for the students who prepare for the Backpacking travel. Students can get traveller’s information such as tourist attractions or famous restaurants from the internet. On the other hand it is hard to get actual, usable tips for the backpacking travellers. So ‘Backpacking Travel Course’ is necessary for the students who are trouble with this problem. Because backpacking travel course contain useful tips such as ‘how to packing the backpack more light, how to leave out the gypsies who are strongly begging for money in slum’. In academical reasons, this course provide knowledges about world’s geography and culture. It contain climate and vegetation information in various places on the earth. And beyond that simple information it provide useful tips such as ‘Best season to travel West Europe is winter because of west coast oceanic climate differ from general thought’ or ‘Best period for the Salar de Uyuni is Bolivian rainy season that from November to April.’ And backpacking travel course also contain world’s culture knowledges such as food, drinking and dancing. For example alpine region in Latin America eat Guinea Pig. People who live this region are hard to get protein. There are few animals because of rugged topography. For these practical and academical reasons, ‘Backpacking Travel Course’ are suited for the university students. Early 20s are perfect for the backpacking travel. Because they have a lot of time during vacation and they are enough energetic to go around all over the world. But after 30s, they have no time to travel because of the work and they are less energetic than 20s. And through this course student can be more independent and well-planned person.

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The University wants to add a new course. What should this new subject be?

Can you help me with the grammar problem? :(


According to the research carried out by one newspaper, more than 85 percent of the university students are hope to backpacking travel in their early 20s. And actually among that research responder around 46 percents are planning to backpacking travel or they already done it. So ‘Backpacking travel course’ is suited for the University’s new course. Backpacking travel need great physical strength and less money than sightseeing such as cruise travelling. Therefore university students are perfect for the backpacking traveller. ‘Backpacking Travel Course‘ is helpful for the students because of practical and academical reasons.
In practical reasons, this class provide real information for the students who prepare for the Backpacking travel. Students can get traveller’s information such as tourist attractions or famous restaurants from the internet. On the other hand it is hard to get actual, usable tips for the backpacking travellers. So ‘Backpacking Travel Course’ is necessary for the students who are trouble with this problem. Because backpacking travel course contain useful tips such as ‘how to packing the backpack more light, how to leave out the gypsies who are strongly begging for money in slum’.
In academical reasons, this course provide knowledges about world’s geography and culture. It contain climate and vegetation information in various places on the earth. And beyond that simple information it provide useful tips such as ‘Best season to travel West Europe is winter because of west coast oceanic climate differ from general thought’ or ‘Best period for the Salar de Uyuni is Bolivian rainy season that from November to April.’ And backpacking travel course also contain world’s culture knowledges such as food, drinking and dancing. For example alpine region in Latin America eat Guinea Pig. People who live this region are hard to get protein. There are few animals because of rugged topography.
For these practical and academical reasons, ‘Backpacking Travel Course’ are suited for the university students. Early 20s are perfect for the backpacking travel. Because they have a lot of time during vacation and they are enough energetic to go around all over the world. But after 30s, they have no time to travel because of the work and they are less energetic than 20s. And through this course student can be more independent and well-planned person.

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