National library situates west in Beijing and beside Purple Bamboo Garden.It is a large library,total area about 240 thousand square metres and it has nineteen floor and three floor is underground,National Library is the third-largest library in the world and the most collect books in Asia, because it has twenty-two milliion of books.But it is more than has a lot of books in there, you can borrow books in there, and the library has web services about borrow books also. 
I always go to here, sometimes reading in there or borrow books, I think it is very good because the facilities are very adranced and the service is high quaity. If you come to Beijing, I think you can visit there, because it has an good environment to enjoy reading books.

The National library situates west in Beijing and beside Purple Bamboo Garden.It is a large library, the total area is about 240 thousand square metres and it has nineteen floors and three floors is are underground,the National Library is the third-largest library in the world and has the most largest collection of books in Asia, because it has twenty-two milliion of books. But it there is more than has just a lot of books in there, you can borrow books in there, and the library has web services about which allow you to borrow books online also too. 
I always go to here, sometimes reading books in there or to borrow books, I think it is very good because the facilities are very adrvanced and the service is of high quaity. If you come to Beijing, I think you can should go(?) visit there, because it has an good environment to enjoy reading books.

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