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Paul Walker Today, I was watching TV and saw the tragic new. This was about Paul's accident, Nobody can confirm his death but on facebook the new is getting bigger and there are many pages which are talking about it. Some of them say that it's a lie. But I don't think they joke with something like that. I really like Paul's movies, I've followed him since the first Fast and Furious movie. If anybody knows something about this new, please tell me if it's true.i'll thank you a lot.

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Paul Walker

Today, I was watching TV and saw the tragic news. This was about Paul's accident, nobody can confirm his death but on facebook the news is getting bigger spreading / going viral and there are many pages which are talking about it. Maybe write: I saw a report about Paul's accident. 

 

Some of them say that it's a lie, but I don't think that they would joke with about something like this. I really like Paul's movies, I've followed him since the first Fast and Furious movie. If anybody knows something about this new, please tell me if it's true. I'll thank you a lot (or "I'll really appreciate it").

 

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Remember to capitalise and punctuate appropriately. Otherwise, good! The news is very sad but it has been confirmed by Universal Studios as well as celebrities on Twitter. :(

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Paul Walker

Today, I was watching TV and saw the tragic newnews. This was about Paul's accident, Nobodynobody can confirm his death; but on facebook the newnews is getting bigger and there are many pages which are talking aboutreporting it. Some of them say that it's a lie, Butbut I don't think they jokeare joking with something like that. I really like Paul's movies, I've followed him since the first Fast and Furious movie. If anybody knows somethinganything about this newnews, please tell me if it's true. I'll thank you a lot.

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