Can anybody correct me? Thanks

Before making a decision it’s important to find out if the decision will be popular with  others?

The public view is very important factor in our society and someone needs support of from   surrounding people. But, in my opinion, a popular decision is not always the best decision. I do not believe that before making a decision, it is important to find out if the solution will be popular with others.

The first reason, that not all popular decisions are right. For example, in the past, the most part of people thought that conflicts can be resolved only by means of war. It was not so necessary every time but it was so popular! Many people died because of this «fashionable» way of the solution of problems.

Another reason of my disagreement that if everyone made the same decision as a majority of people, we would not open for World such great people as Heraclitus, Archimedes, Leonardo da Vinci and their inventions. As they had revolutionary ideas, which society could not support. These people risked of them their lives for the sake of the inventions.

As it is important to understand, that every decision is a big responsibility. And if he or she doesn’t ready to assume take the responsibility,then  they should not to do it.

On the basis of the aforesaid, I want to draw a conclusion that not every popular decision is the best and everyone is responsible for his own decisions. I totally believe that people should not make any decision depending on its popularity.

Though, I do my best to correct your entry, I am not native English. I would like to see a correction from native English person to see if I do it right or wrong.

All the best