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My unemployed life
I have been unemployed for a full month. During this month, I have finished several goals that I wanted to do when I was employed. I am glad that I can have time to do these things.
When I heard that our office was cancelled, I was so excited because that meant I can do somthing which I always planed but never had an oppertunity too. 3 days later I told my friend "Let's go to southern China to have a look".She agreed with me immediately. We booked our tickets and hotels together and then went to Xiamen shortly. For people that come from north of China, it's really a great place to visit. 6 days later we unfortunately had to go back home.:(
Then we went to take personal albums in memory of our youth. :)
Finally I got back to my hometown to learn the driving license. it's a long term learning.Since the Spring festivalis coming, I did not want to find a new job before that. But learning driving needn't to go to traing school everyday. I became lazy recently. I usually wake up at 9:00am to 10:00am. So I just eat brunch. I become a night owl. I always told myself that it was too cold outside so I just stayed home in bed.:( I knew that was just a excuse. I wondered what I should do to make myself more positive and efficient for my study and life at home. So I made a schedule to increase my self-discipline.
1. Get up regularly around 7:00am.
2.Do more exercise (running 30 munites).
3. Make and eat three meals a day.
4. Study English by myself at least 2 hours.
5. Talk to others to practice my oral English 1 hour every day.
6. go to sleep on time before 11:00pm.
Hope I can have a regular life as above for the next 3 months.:)
Come on!
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Okay, I tried to make the corrections as best as I could.
Green = Corrections and better ways of saying things.
Yellow = I wasn't excatly sure what you ment.
Red = Couldn't understand at all. Try rewording.
Looks like you have a pretty good understanding of grammer but make sure you use the past tense when talking about the past. Keep working on your verbs. If you have any questions feel free to message me and I'll try my best to help you.
I am not intended to correct anything in your sentences . All I am trying is to make sentences in my way
Regards
Finally I came back to my hometown to learn the driving license. it's a long term learning.
Finally I came back to my hometown to learn driving for passing the test of driver's license . It is a long haul learning.
Learning driving needn't to go to traing school everyday.
I do not have to go to driving school for learning every day .
"Let's go to south of China to have a look".
"Let's take a look for southern China ".
I have been being an unemployed for totally one month.
I have been unemployed for more than 1 month
I am glad that I can have time to do those things.
I am glad to have more time left for interesting activity
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