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thinks Today I returned from italki again. I dont know why. I dont want to think about something I want to dream and live in the world which I invented in my mind. I dont want to think about thousand of people which died in Syria because it hurt me. I cant believe that one people may kill another. I dont understand why. But it is our real world where people may be so agressive and angry. It is simple understand every people have right to live. Every man want live, want to look in lovely eyes, want to breath, dance, sing. If someone think that he may kill another he is wrong. He is wrong because another man want live like he. I want that people in our world be more happy, kind than today. When the world will be pretty kind I will finish to live in my dream and come back to real life

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Today I returned from italki again. I don't know why, but I don't want to think about anything. I want to dream and live in the world which I invented in my mind. I don't want to think about thousands of people which died in Syria because it hurts me. I can't believe that one person may kill another. I don't understand why, but it is in our real world where people may be so agressive and angry. It is simple to understand, every person has the right to live. Every man wants to live, wants to look into lovely eyes, wants to breath, dance, and sing. If someone thinks that he may kill another, he is wrong. He is wrong because another man wants live like he does. I want  people in our world to be more happy, more kind than today. When the world will be pretty kind, I will finish to live in my dream and come back to real life.

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This was written with a lot of emotion! It was written well:-)

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