Almost revolution!
Here, in Kyiv, Ukraine, for the last few days people protested against our President. He decided not to sign Association with EU.
On our main square people spent days and nights and wanted to feel democracy in their own country. But today at 4 am they were dispersed by army forces. They beat men, women and children!!! Many of them were taken to jail.
Here is Ukrainian democracy!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H_Xo_cMg6Xw
The US President made a petition
Impose personal sanctions on President of Ukraine Viktor Yanukovych and Cabinet of Ministers of Ukraine members
http://wh.gov/lkq2m
Follow the link and help to save our country!
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Almost Revolution!
Here, in Kyiv (Kiev), Ukraine, for the last few days, people have been protesting against our President. He decided not to sign an association agreement with the EU.
People spent days and nights on our main square, wanting to feel democracy in their own country. But today at 4 am they were dispersed by armed police. They beat men, women, and children!!! Many of them were taken to jail.
Here is Ukrainian democracy!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H_Xo_cMg6Xw
A petition was presented to the President of the United States, requesting the imposition of personal sanctions on Ukrainian President Viktor Yanukovych, and on the members of Ukraine's Cabinet of Ministers. http://wh.gov/lkq2m
Follow the link and help to save my country!
I hope that all will turn out well for your country.
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Ukraine has had a long and difficult struggle. Stay strong!
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