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Today is Saturday,there is no school, and the sun is shining. My roommates are preparing to go shopping, but I don't want to go with them. Because I don't like shopping, I feel it's so tired to walk around in the shopping mall. I intend to go to the library in the afternoon. when I read in the library near a window, the sun gets through the window into my body, I feel it's very comfortable and warm, and I will be going in a good mood. So I like sunshine, and I also like to read in the library.
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Today
Today is Saturday. There is no school, and the sun is shining. My roommates are preparing to go shopping, but I don't want to go with them. Because I don't like shopping - I feel it's too tiring to walk around in the shopping mall. (Instead,) I intend to go to the library in the afternoon. When I read in the library near a window, the sun shines through the window onto my body; I feel so comfortable and warm, and it puts in a good mood. I like sunshine, and I also like to read in the library.
// Very nice. Be careful about run-on sentences.
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Today is Saturday, there is no school, and the sun is shining. My roommates are going to go shopping, but I don't want to go with them. I don't like shopping, because I get so tired walking around the mall. Instead, this afternoon I am going to go read by a window in the library. When the sun shines through the window, I feel very comfortable and warm, and this always puts me in a good mood.
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