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When i wake up this moring,the idea still stays in my mind.At this time,i want to go home.Parents are so important to me.I come to beijing alone.Currently,something makes me believe that maybe Beijing is not fit for me,and i do not like Beijing as i thought.Although i broaden my view here,it is not a good place for living.Perhaps i should go back to Wuhan Province.
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This Time
When I wake up this moring, the idea still stays in my mind. At this time, I want to go home. Parents are so important to me. I come to Beijing alone. Currently, something makes me believe that maybe Beijing is not fit for me, and I do not like Beijing as I thought. Although I broaden my view here, it is not a good place for living. Perhaps I should go back to Wuhan Province.
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