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The event room
The event room is the heart of the theater, music, congress hall, theme parties. [1] It is a large, barrier-free, easily accessible from the outside, and has easy access for the unloading of materials. The flexibility of the space offers the possibility of different construction solutions. [2]
The event room has a capacity of up to a maximum of 400 seats, of which 180 are seated. [3] It has good acoustics, and the ceiling is equipped with a track system that allows the placement of lighting devices on the entire surface of the ceiling. It has a wooden stage.
[1] I cannot understand what you want to say about "music, congress hall, and theme parties. I do not understand their relationship to the event room.
[2] "construction solutions" is correct English, but I wonder if that is the idea you really want to express. Do you mean, "... offers the possibility of different configurations"?
[3] "of which 180 are seated" is not understandable.
If the name of the room is the "Event Room," then the words Event Room should be capitalized.
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