Could you please correct my essay
Hi, could please correct my essay it is bout sport ,it contains 5 paragraph essay:
If I were a boy, I would like be into sport. Sport is one of the most important thing in our life.it contains many actives that helps us to lose wight and keeps our health good.sport is good for us physically ,mentally and socially.
Sport good for us physically.it helps to get a good shape. Moreover, if we have an illness such as blood surge, sport is one of the good ways to keep it a natural rate.
Sport good for us mentally. It make our brain feel good. In addition, sport boost our self-esteem and help us concentrate ,sleep ,look and feel better.
Sport is good for us socially. It makes us face many different people and communicate with them. However, it makes people cooperate with each other.
Finally ,sport has many good benefits for physically,mental and social .as young people, we should pick at least one sport and play it such as football.therefor our health will be good and our social communication will improving
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Could you please correct my essay
Hi, could please correct my essay it is bout sport ,it contains 5 paragraph essay:
If I were a boy, I would like to do sports. Sport is one of the most important thing in our life. It contains many activites that help us to lose weight and keep our health good. Sport is good for us physically,mentally and socially.
Sport is good for us physically. It helps to be in fit. Moreover, if we have an illness such as blood surge, sport is one of the good ways to keep it a natural rate.
Sport is good for us mentally. It makes our brain feel good. In addition, sport boosts our self-esteem and helps us to concentrate, sleep, look and feel better.
Sport is good for us socially. It makes us face many different people and communicate with them. However, it makes people cooperate with each other.
Finally, sport has many good benefits from physical, mental and social points of view. As young people, we should pick at least one lind of sport and play it such as football. therefor our health will be good and our social communication will improve
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