2013.11.25

Wow..It is my first note.....
I'm exciteding and worriedying to write here.
I'm very worried.
Can you understand my note..?hahaha...Sorry.
Because I'll go to Pomona in the U.S.A....
Will I acclimatise myself to a new environment?T.T..
I must do...
What can I do for me?T.T

I know...My English skill is so bad.
But I'll try again and again.
Let's e a Positive Thinker think positively  !
One day I'll get better? Do you agree it?

2013.11.25

Wow..It is my first note.....
I'm feeling excited and worried about what to write.
I'm very worried.
Can you understand my note..?hahaha...Sorry.
Because I am going to Pomona in U.S.A....
Will i be able to acclimate myself to a new environment?T.T..
I must do...
What can i do for myself?T.T

I know...My english skill is so bad.
But I'll try again and again.
Let's Be a Positive Thinker!
One day I'll get better? Do you agree it?

2013.11.25

Wow..It This is my first note.....
I'm exciting and worrying to write excited and worried about writing here.
I'm very worried.
Can you understand my note..?_Hahaha...Sorry.
Because I am studying English because I am planning to I'll go to Pomona in U.S.A....
Will i acclimate I adjust myself to a this new environment? T.T..
I must do...
What can i I do to help myself for me?_T.T

I know...My English skill is so bad, but I'll keep trying try again and again.
Let's Be a Positive Thinker think positively!
One day, I'll get better right? Do you agree it?

**Notes:

1) Your English is already pretty good! Keep working hard and it will definitely get better :)

2) Pomona is a pretty nice city with a lot of things to do, but I think you will like it. Would you be attending Cal Poly Pomona, perhaps?

3) When you are writing, make sure to capitalize the word "I", even if it is just a letter. Anything using the word "I" should be capitalized (such as "I'm", "I'll", etc.)

4) When you start a sentence, it is best to avoid using conjunctions such as "But", "And", or "So." Sometimes you can use the words above to combine two sentences instead of writing one long one. (ex: I am at the supermarket. I do not know what to buy. --> I am at the supermarket, but I do not know what to buy)