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Choose job Some people make their career choices according to what they enjoy, whereas others place more importance on earning on high salary. Personally, I support the view that both criteria should be equal consideration.(33) On the one hand, I agree that people should follow their dreams, do whatever they want to do and choose their job based on their abilities and hobbies. Firstly, when they do works with full of enthusiasm and strong passions, efficiency of works allways achieves the highest level, making their employers highly satisfactory. Secondly, excitement in working give them happy feelings, so they are not always under a lot of stress in spite of challenges which they encouter. Finally, the most important thing is following what they enjoy always give them numerous opportunities to improve their knowledge and experiences; therefore it is easy to climb highlier up career ladder.(93) On the other hand,sometimes, money is employees' motivation. When salary is not enough to satisfy basic needs of life, seemly, it is hard for worker to concentrate in works. As a result, they have to make extra-work to earn more money to pay for their bills.This cause explains why employees have no time to deepen their professional knowledge and advance in their job.Therefore, what it means is that high salary is also important key to impusle the development of career.(83) In conclusion,enjoyment and money have a mutual relasionship in choosing job. Therefore, after graduating, young people should consider both factors carefally to have an appropriate choices.(28)

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hehe :D, nice to see you! Thanks again,
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Thanks Johnathan Whiteley ;)!
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You are welcome Thanh Xuan, but no need to be so formal ;-) Jonathan is fine
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Choose a job

Some people make their career choices according to what they enjoy, whereas others place more importance on earning on a high salary. Personally, I support the view that both criteria should be given equal consideration.(33)

On the one hand, I agree that people should follow their dreams, do whatever they want to do and choose their job based on their abilities and hobbies. Firstly, when they do their works with full of enthusiasm and strong passions, efficiency of works allways achieves the highest level, making their employers highly satisfactory. Secondly, excitement in about their working gives them happy feelings, so they are not always under a lot of stress in spite of challenges which they encounter. Finally, the most important thing is that following what they enjoy always gives them numerous opportunities to improve their knowledge and experiences; therefore it is easy to climb highlier up career ladder.(93)

On the other hand, sometimes, money is an employees' motivation. When salary is not enough to satisfy the basic needs of life, seemingly, it is hard for a worker to concentrate in works. As a result, they have to make undertake extra-work to earn more money to pay for their bills.  This cause explains why employees have no time to deepen their professional knowledge and advance in their job.  Therefore, what it means is that a high salary is also an important key to impusle in the development of a career.(83)

In conclusion, enjoyment and money have a mutual relationship in choosing a job. Therefore, after graduating, young people should consider both factors carefully to have an make the appropriate choices.(28)

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