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My college life is almost near completion. <--see blue. I have to say time has gone smoothly when I didn't realize it.

Option A: My college life is coming to an end.

Option B: This year my college life is almost finished.

???>>>> I was thinking that it seem like I didn't match my plan when i was told myself before the gradution, like i want to improve my computer skills. I think it is necessary in the work.

Before graduation, I told myself to improve my computer skills, but I did not met my goal yet. I think computer skills is a qualify skill in the working field.

Everytime when I turn on my computer and connect it, I just can't help myself from surfing the net on the street and reply some messages and then I forget that I need to practice my typing speed and office operation.

>>>New topic= new paragraph!!!

In addition, I was interesteding in Psychological and Tourism, planning to find some book to know more about it more. But , maybe  I scatter my energy on too many things at once.

??>>I didn't take an action.

Thetefore, you guys better concentrate all you energy on what you care about the most, take an action, and you 'll get outstanding results.

Do not always keep silent in your site. Sometimes when you study in the classroom, students always easy to keep quiet, and do their business. I think it's not good for our study, you can ask any questions you want as well give some feedback to your tutor. Your problem will be increasing if you miss the oppotunites to talk with tutor. Of course, you can't improve your study.
Join some study group!

Because it is always a good chance for me to communicate with different people. <RIght now you are talking about yourself. And I am confuse if you are talking to me, about yourself, or to yourself.

You will deal with all kinds of situations in different style when things happed. I had quit the  group <WHAT GROUP?! DO YOU MEAN STUDY GROUP?>when i think there is stuff annoying me.

However, untill now I realized it's a challenge if I can fix it well. All in all, if you can keep it up, you can do this.
Part-time job is a important part of my college life. The work experience can make me become a mature team working person.

??See pink or purple below>I felt happy when I had made a decision in my second year, I was been to Fujian province with a girl for traveling.

 I felt happy when I made decision during my sophmore year when I was traveling to Fujian Province with a girl.

We planned the trip line and found the board and lodging by ourselves. It's a 15 hour trip by train at that time.
So, remind yourself the time is passing, do what you want to do. Cripe diem.<--what is cripe diem?

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Make a clear statement that you are talking about yourself or to the reader.

Example: You should study harder because studying pays off in the long run. For instance, I studied hard for my college entrance exam and I got in the school I wanted
Do you see the difference and it sounds more clearer.