Today
Today is sunny,but still cold.the temperature is 7 degrees.The temperature difference is between day and night.
I had lunch with my friend in the Chinese restrant ,It's not dilisious ,not Chinese's taste.so i have a little disappointed。I want eat my mother's cooking!I want to back my home.I'm in Japan now!
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Today
Today is sunny, but still cold. The temperature is 7 degrees. There is a big temperature difference between daytime and night-time. (not sure what you want to say here, there is always a difference between night and day)
I had lunch with my friend in the a Chinese restaurant. It wasn't very good (Chinese people use delicious too much!), it didn't taste like Chinese food so I was a little disappointed. I want to eat my mother's cooking! I want to be back in my home. I'm in Japan now!
One of my students is called July. A lovely sunny name.
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Today
Today is sunny, but still cold. The temperature is 7 degrees. The temperature difference is between Night and Day.
I had lunch with my friend in the a Chinese restrant restaurant, It's the meal was not dilisious delicious, not it did not have a Chinese's taste. So i have a was a little disappointed。I want to eat my mother's cooking! I want to back my home. I'm in Japan now!
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