ON Maintaining Trust
Today,I see a topic about maintaining trust.I think it a lot .Now,let's talk about it.
With the development of economy,there is a big problem exisiting in society,that the relationship between people is becoming indifferent.They are strictly particular about all things around them.I find that the richer they are,the more unhappy they feel.I don't know why its too hard for them to trust people, why people must always live in suspicious life.we are famlies.We can smile together,dance together,and comfort each other.we can share our happiness and sadness together based on trust.I firmly believe that if we trust people based on complete respect,we may have a different world.
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ON Maintaining Trust
Today,I saw (see) a topic about maintaining trust. It (I) made me think (it) a lot. Now, let's talk about it.
With the development of the economy, a major (there is a big) problem has arisen (exisiting) in society,in that the relationships between people are (is) becoming indifferent.They are becoming very (strictly) particular about their environment. (all things around them.) I find that the richer they are,the more unhappy they feel.I don't know why they find it so (its too) difficult (hard for them) to trust people, why people must always be so circumspect (live in suspicious life.) We are a family (famlies.) after all. We can smile together,dance together,and comfort each other. We can share our happiness and sadness together, based on trust. I firmly believe that if we were to trust people based on a complete respect, then we may have a different world.
Agree with what you say. I just suggesting substituting a few different words in places. Please remember that the comma (,) appears directly after the word and you then leave a gap - like so....'however, there is....'
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