An Accident Occurred Today
China Petroleum and Chemical Corporation (“SINOPEC” in short as follow) is the biggest companies of China. Today afternoon, a sub-company of SINOPEC occured a big accident, which caused 35 people died and 166 people injured. This is an oil explosion accident. The government and the saving team hurried to the accident site and organized the saving works. We feel sorry about them and hope the people who injured by the accident will be well as soon as possible. God bless them.
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An Accident Occurred Today
China Petroleum and Chemical Corporation (“SINOPEC” in short as follow) is one of the biggest companies of China. Today afternoon, a sub-company of SINOPEC experienced [or 'suffered'] a big accident, which caused the death of 35 people died and injuries to another 166 people injured. This was an accident involving an oil explosion accident. The government and the rescue team hurried to the accident site and organized the rescue and medical help. We feel sorry about them and hope the people who injured by the accident will be well as soon as possible. God bless them.
[Your basics are good. You could also say "which left 35 people dead and another 166 injured." You don't have to say 'people' twice, because it is understood.]
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