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Believe Yourself,and You Will Be Unique Last week, i watched the movie <Happy Feet>. It gives me some ideas to write down. Mumble is happy, because he do himself. Mumble is unique,because he walks his way that differs others. All of these are owing to he believes himself. Believing himself, he finds happy. When all the companions singing with their beautiful voice, Mumble doesn’t. He just thinks that dancing with feet more suitable for him. Although, it is not accepted by others and banished by the dominator,he believes himself and do his way. After making friends with another word’s penguins and be popular with them,he finds his happiness. Sometimes, we do somethings that others also do and seems good. But,we don’t know what we are doing! Like me, working in the Students’union, which seems good. So many people making fiends widely with somebody for some reason. Why do i do things just for please others? I asked myself. The answer is that i don’t like it. So i keep quieting and doing myself. There’s no doubt that i am happy.     Believing himself, he is unique. When Mumble sees a machine,he convinces that there must exists aliens. Nobody believes him but his several foreign friends. Under his persistence and leading, facing difficulties and pasting places,they found aliens and proved themselves. Finally, Mumble saves all the penguins by his unique way---dancing with feet. It is his unique dance that attracts human’s attention and protects their home and life. I’m a good example, thinking the bad results first when i start to do something. As a result,i’m not brave enough to do it. Why? Why don’t a believe myself? All of us are unique,we just haven’t believe ourselves enough!     Mumble teaches me a lot. Believe yourself, and you’ll be happy. Also, believe yourself, and you’ll be unique. l hope you can revise my article, thanks

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Believe in yourself, and you will be unique.

Last week, I watched the movie "Happy Feet" (put quotations around movie or book titles). It gives gave me some ideas to write down.
Mumble is happy(,) because he do does (sounds like slang) himself. Mumble is unique, because he walks his own way, even though it that differs from others. All of these are owing to This is because he believes in himself.


Believing in himself, he finds happy happiness. When all the companions singing sing with their beautiful voice voices, Mumble doesn’t. He just thinks that dancing with feet is more suitable for him. Although(,) it is not accepted by others and banished by the dominator, he believes in himself and do his way does his own thing. After making friends with another other word’s penguins and be becoming popular with them, he finds his happiness. Sometimes, we do some things that others also do and seems seem good. But we don’t know what we are doing! Like me, working in the Students’ union, which seems good. So many people making make friends widely with somebody many people for some reason. "Why do I do things just for to please others?" I asked myself. The answer is that i don’t like it. So I keep quiting and doing myself. There’s no doubt that I am happy.


    Believing in himself, he is unique. When Mumble sees a machine, he is convinced convinces that there must exists aliens aliens must exist. Nobody believes him but except his several foreign friends. Under his persistence and leading, facing difficulties and pasting places (what?), they found find aliens and prove themselves. Finally, Mumble saves all the penguins by with his unique way---dancing with feet. It is his unique dance that attracts human’s attention and protects their home and life. I’m a good example, thinking of the bad results first when I start to do something. As a result, I’m not brave enough to do it. Why? Why don’t a believe in myself? All of us are unique, we just haven’t believe believed in ourselves enough!


    Mumble teaches me a lot. Believe in yourself, and you’ll be happy. Also, believe in yourself, and you’ll be unique.


l hope you can revise my article, thanks.

 

很好!我也是踢踏舞者。"Happy Feet"是我的最喜欢电影 :)

 

Very interesting! I definitely connect with this. It's better to focus on a few things you like to do, than to try to do a bunch of things even if you don't like it. Very good job!

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