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My First Time Notebook Talking About A Movie.
I saw 47 RONIN's trailer on TV & Youtube > http://youtu.be/p0bLFDIN9Ms
I feel confused complicate and also I think this movie will be seem no good because this story is based on 「忠臣蔵」(Cyuusingura) which is a very famous story that has been loved for a long time in Japan. Also it based on true story!
So i feel confused complicate and I think 47RONIN's stage looks like Chinese Monster film's too!
Hey Kinzo,
A couple of mistakes but very good attempt!
I'm not sure what you meant by complicated so I've put confused instead because I think you are unsure if the film is going to be good or no. Conflicted could also be a good word.
I've joined a few of your sentences together as well so it is more flowing.
I also wasn't sure what you meant about the Chinese.Monster comment! I think you meant the stage looked fake so have compared it to a Chinese Monster film.
Good work. Well done!
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