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I don't know how to start it. Here I come, I start my first writing finally, but I don't know what I should write about and how to start it. After reading this article, you might find out there is no point in it. Usually, I just here for reading other people's writing. I think other people always get something to write about, and the things they write can always be interesting and so true to life. Then, I start wondering why they can do this and why their lives are so colorful. Maybe just because my life is too boring, and that makes all others' lives look so variegated by comparing with mine. About me, a normal girl get a boring job in a little company work with all elderly colleagues and under a mean boss with lower pay, so, you think how interesting my life can be...but never mind, all of these can not beat me down, I've already decided to quit and go travel for months next year, now, all I have to do just save money for the trip. But,, I find that I can save nothing with such a low payment!!! But don't worry, I still have a backup plan, the plan B is that I am ready to be a hobo when I am traveling...good luck to myself~

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I don't know how to start it.

Here I go. I start my first writing finally, but I don't know what I should write about and how to start it. After reading this article, you might find that there is no point in it. Usually, I am just here to/in order to reading other people's writing. I think other people always have something to write about, and the things they write are always be interesting and so true to life. Then, I start wondering why they can do this and why their lives are so colorful. Maybe it is just because my life is too boring, and that makes all others' lives look so variegated (WOW! awesome word!) by compared with mine. About me: I'm a normal girl with a boring job in a little company working with all elderly colleagues and under a mean boss with lower pay. So you wonder how interesting my life can be...but never mind. All of these can not beat me down. I've already decided to quit and go travel for a few months next year. Now, all I have to do is just save money for the trip. But, I find that I can save nothing with such a low salary!!! But don't worry, I still have a backup plan. The plan B is that I am ready to be a hobo when I am traveling...good luck to myself~

Your English is great! It was actually very entertaining to read as you describe your thoughts on the "variegated" and vibrant lives that you see other people living.  Also, your life does not seem boring to me!  I think that your plan to travel is awesome.  The fact that you have decided to make beneficial decisions to change your life is commendable and truly one of the hardest qualities to find in people these days.  People become complacent, never willing to take those important steps to make change happen, but not you!  You will find the lifestyle that you are looking for in time. Until then, keep writing, keep making changes, and keep smiling! 

~Jake 

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