My new life

Hi, my name is Irene, i´mI'm 23 years old. I was born in Spain, in a little city which is in the south of the country.
I have finished all my studies. Nowadays, I have two degrees. I had graduated last year, I have a degree in psychology. Two years ago,I had graduated again. I have with a degree in teaching. after i have a and I had to complete/pass some very competitive exams for before working how as a teacher in/at the state school but I faling failed my exam. I'm a very energetic person a lot of energetic, outgoing, nervous and i´m not nothing homely (i dont like being in my house too much/at all).
I tell you all this because this year is the first whichyear that i´m not doing nothinganything . i´m trying to find a job about with/that makes use of my degree buy but it is impossible. i´m hopeless, i sent a lot of resumes but nobody has called back (yet).
At the present time in Spain the English is very important for all types of jobs, and i dont know how to speak or write English/it. For all this, Therefore, I will need to learn English quickly if I want to work in a school. My big problem is that i´m really minder and duffer (??).

My new life

Hi, my name is Irene, i´m 23 years old. I was born in Spain, in a little city which is in the south of the country.
I have finished all my studies. Nowadays, i I have two degrees. i I had graduated last year, I have a ( it sounds more idiomatic to say "with a" degree in psychology. Two years ago, I had graduated again. I now have a degree in teaching. after i have a competitive exams for working how a teacher in the state school but i faling my exam After graduating, I had a competitive exam in order to work as a teacher in a state school, but I failed the exam. I´m an energetic person a lot of energetic, outgoing, nervous and I´m not nothing homely (this doesn't really make sense to an English ear, it might be better to say that "I don't like being indoors" (i dont like being in my house).
I'm telling you all this because this years is the first in which I´m not doing nothing anything. I´m trying to find a job about suited to my degree but it is impossible. I´m hopeless, I've sent off a lot of resumes, but nobody has called.
At the present time in spain, speaking the english is very important for all types of jobs, and I don't know how to speak or write in english. For all this For these reasons, I will need to learn english quickly if I want to work in a school. My big problem is that I'm really minder and duffer. (I'm not sure at all what you mean by "minder and duffer" if you can clarify, I'll help you find some better words to express this!)

A good start, Irene.

You MUST make sure to capitalise "I" and "I'm" as it looks very messy to an english reader otherwise. Also, don't forget to capitalise at the beginning of sentences. I wish you good luck in finding a new job- don't give up hope! The job market is terrible for everybody at the minute, so you can't blame yourself.

All the best from England,

Amelia~