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I got my car upside down. Mexican streets are not in good state; they have a lot of bumps and holes. After a rainy day, all bumps and holes are even bigger. So I was just driving my old Tracker the other day when I couldn't avoid some bumps on the street, the street was still wet and slippery so I lost control of my car, I tried to maneuver the steering wheel and I could avoid to crash with another car, but I couldn't avoid to have my car on the sidewalk and because the speed and inertia my car had I crashed with a fence and my car got rollovered (I don't know if that's the correct term, what I want to say is that tires of my car were upside). Since I was wearing my seat belt I didn't get hurt at all, but everyone who saw the accident was completely shocked, I think it wasn't such a big deal, but they called an ambulance and they didn't let me stand up once I got outside of the car. I wasn't a scary experience for me, but what is indeed awful is that meanwhile my car is being repaired I will be using the public transportation, thing that I don't like. There's a photo of my car as well, in case you don't believe or I didn't explain correctly what happened.

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I turned my car upside down.

Mexican streets are in poor condition; they have a lot of bumps and potholes.
After a rainy day, the bumps and holes are even bigger.
I was just driving my old Tracker the other day when I couldn't avoid some bumps on the street. The street was still wet and slippery, and I lost control of my car. I was able to manuver around another car,   but slid up on the sidewalk, crashed into a fence, and rolled-over. Since I was wearing my seat belt I didn't get hurt at all, but everyone who saw the accident was completely shocked. I thought it wasn't a big deal but they called an ambulance and they didn't let me stand up once I got outside of the car.
I wasn't a scary experience for me, but what is indeed awful is that while my car is being repaired I will be using public transportation, a thing that I don't like to do.
In case you don't believe me or I didn't clearly explain what happened, I've attached a photo of the wreck. 

     Good story Gabo! Remember that in English it is not always necessary to use "to" before verbs. You wrote a well-organized story. Consider using fewer words in your sentences.  
     Buena historia Gabo! Recuerde que en Inglés, no siempre es necesario el uso de "a" antes de los verbos. Usted escribió una historia bien organizada. Considere el uso de un menor número de palabras en sus oraciones.

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