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Disappointment( Today was a very sad day. France wins Ukraine 3:0 and will go to Brazil...We were very close to the target (Ukraine won first match 2:0) but this World Cup in 2014 will again without Ukraine. It's really a big disappointment. Next chance will be only in 4 years(( I want just to thank National Team of Ukraine for eagerness and congratulate France with victory.

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Disappointment(

Today was a very sad day. France winsbeat Ukraine 3:0 and will go to Brazil...We were very close to the target (Ukraine won the first match 2:0) but this World Cup in 2014 will again take place without Ukraine. It's really a big disappointment. Next chance will be only in 4 years((
I want just to thank the National Team of Ukraine for their eagerness and congratulate France with for their victory.

 

Nicely written.

Just to note: When using 'will' it should be followed by a verb. 

P.S

I'm sorry Ukraine didn't make it tonight!                                  

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