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Friendship
Nowadays, friendship has a different meaning.
People used to say, "hey, he's my friend!", when actually, they had just met each other and they didn't really care if the other person had had a bad day or something bad had happend to them. But nowadays, a "friend" will just listen to your problems, but they don't really care; they won't make an effort to help you or to make you feel better. They just want to look like they're friendly, but won't do anything more.
I think friendship goes beyond that. Friendship is more than a simple relationship, more than a simple conversation and having a good time chatting. From my point of view, a friendship is something you have to look for everyday and spend a lot of time on. You have to give the best of you to the other person without expecting he will do the same. You have to worry for him or her, and to want the best for them. By doing this, you will find a true friend.
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Great job, I agree with you!
Friendship
Nowadays, friendship has a different meaning. People say "Hey, he's my friend!", when actually they have just met each other and don't care about each other having a bad day or if something bad has happend. Now it seems that, a so-called friend is just going to listen your problems and they don't really care because they make no effort to help or comfort you. They call themselves friends, but they are not true friends.
I think a true friendship goes beyond that. Friendship is more than a simple relationship, more than just having a good time talking with one another. From my point of view, friendships are things you should seek to improve everyday, giving your best to the other person without expecting anything in return. Real friends show concern for each other; always wanting the best for each other. If you have a relationship like that, you have a true friendship.
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Friendship
Nowadays, friendship has a different meaning.
People use to say: hey, he's my friend! When actually, they have just met each other and they don't care if you have a bad day or something bad has happend to you. Now, a "friend"is just going to listen your problems, but they don't really mind, they won't make an effort to help you or to make you feel better, they just want to look like they're friendly, not any more.
I think friendship goes beyond that. Friendship is more than a simple relationship, more than a simple conversation and a good time talking. From my point of view, a friendship is something you have to look for everyday and for so much time. You have to give the best of you to the other person without expecting he will do the same. You have to worry about him or her, and to want the best for them. Only in this way, you will find a true friend.
I'm not sure what you meant by "and for so much time"
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