Search from various English teachers...
[Deleted]
Some words about my hobbies My main hobbies are cars, languages and photos. I can name them only hobbies, because I’m not a specialist in these areas. And I absolutely like reading. I don’t mind going to theater or clubbing, I’m not very keen on places where there are many people. But I really like musicals and sometimes I enjoy them. And I celebrate every New Year in a restaurant with my friends. I like travelling. Usually I go to business trips, but on my birthday I go abroad. I really like walking around, seeing new interesting places and taking photos. And I enjoy the cuisine, sea and nature, of course. I’m quite keen on watching biathlon cup competition and the Olympic and Paralympic games. There are really supernatural powers of the people. I’m so excited about it.

Corrections · 4

1

Some words about my hobbies

My main hobbies are cars, languages and photos. I can name call them only hobbies, because I’m not a specialist in these areas. And I absolutely like love* reading.
I don’t mind like going to theater or clubbing; I’m not very keen on places where there are many people. But I really like musicals, and sometimes I enjoy them. And I celebrate every New Year in a restaurant with my friends.
I like travelling. Usually I go to on business trips, but on my birthday I go abroad. I really like walking around, seeing new, interesting places and taking photos. And I enjoy the cuisine, sea and nature, of course.
I’m quite keen on watching the biathlon cup competition and the Olympic and Paralympic games. There are The people have really supernatural powers of the people. I’m so excited about it.

 

* It sounds odd to say "absolutely like," because "absolutely" is typically used to modify a strong emotion (such as love). "Like" is a weaker emotion. If you absolutely love something, it means you like it very, very much!

I agree with Daniel. Unlike in Russian, in formal English we usually don't start sentences with conjunctions (and, but, or, и т.д.).

1

Some Words About my Hobbies

My main hobbies are cars, languages and photography. I call them hobbies because I’m not a specialist in these areas. I absolutely love reading.
I don’t mind going to the theater or clubbing but I’m not very keen on places where there are many people. I really like musicals and I always enjoy them. I celebrate every New Year's Day in a restaurant with my friends.
I like travelling. Usually I go on business trips, but on my birthday I go abroad. I really like walking around, seeing new, interesting places and taking photos. I enjoy cuisine, sea and nature.
I’m quite keen on watching the biathlon cup competition and the Olympic and Paralympic games. There are really supernatural powers in people. I’m so excited about it.

Very well written story Daniela. Be careful with your use of "and". Normally this word is not used to begin a sentence. Also, titles are capitalized as edited above. Keep up the good work!

-Daniel

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today