Holiday
I was off today.
I went to the gym to take a lesson.
I went to eat a pancake to "Eggs'n Things " with a friend afterwards.
That is very tasty and super populae.
After that we eat supper in "Hard Roce cafe" of Yokohama.
Today was a very wonderful day!
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Holiday
I was off today.
I went to the gym to take a class lesson.
I went to eat a pancake at to "Eggs'n Things " with a friend afterwards. [Usually, we eat more than one pancake because they are small, but sometimes a restaurant has a big pancake. If you ate more than one pancake, you should say "I went to eat pancakes..."]
It was That is very tasty and super crowded populae. [One pancake = "It was..." Two or more pancakes = "They were..." I don't understand "populae". If you mean the restaurant was popular, you could say "It's a popular restaurant". If you mean the pancake/pancakes are popular, you could say "The pancakes are popular there"
After that we ate eat supper at in "Hard Rock Cafe" in of Yokohama.
Today was a very wonderful day!
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I agree with Ron's comments except I think a better way to phrase the third sentence would be:
Afterwards, a friend and I went to Eggs'n Things to eat pancakes.
Actually I also prefer:
I took today off. or I had today off (not I was off today)
I think this is more poetic:
They are super tasty and very popular.
and it is "at the Hard Rock Cafe".
I was at the Hard Rock Cafe in Roppongi last month.. hahaa
Hope I've been of some help.
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