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My weekend^^ My weekend is not bad. I enjoyed playing football in girls' team. I was interested in that. I could run a lot on football field. I thought I'm being out of power. I was exhausted but fans of my class always cheer my team. They shouted, clapped and made me be funny. So, I had a great moment when I had decided to join the team.hihi

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My weekend^^

My weekend was* not bad. I enjoyed playing football in girls' team. I am** interested in that. I could run a lot on the football field. I thought I was out of power. I was exhausted but fans of my class always cheered on*** my team/ ...cheered my team on. They shouted, clapped and made me be funny.****
So, I had a great time playing in the team/ I feel I've made a great decision by joining the team. Hihi..

 

*your weekend has passed, so it is in the past :D

 

**if you are interested in something, use simple present tense because it's something that stays with you forever or, at least, for a really long time. but if you're only interested for a moment and now you're not into it anymore, it is fine to use the past tense -- even better to use past perfect (e.g. I had been interested in playing football).

 

***(the sentence would sound better like this:) I was exhausted, but fans of my class kept cheering us on. (use 'us' because it is clear that the fans of your class are cheering for you, therefore they must be supporting your team, so it is unnecessary to state 'my team', even though it's not gramatically wrong or something! =D)

 

****If you mean, they made you laugh because they were funny, say: "...they made me laugh." But if you mean, your fans somehow made you do funny things that made them laugh: "their presence inspired me to make jokes."

 

*****This is kind of hard to explain, lol, so... if you really want to know I'll try to elaborate more on it in the messages :D Feel free to ask me anything! ^^

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