short stories of me
hello,my name is mimmo,i have 49 year but i don't think at the age,i work in my shop with my Brother i sell paints for wood and wall,is very interesting job because i speak with person all day,for they problem of color this room is for the study which color is rather,in my private life i like the gym,i walk and i see the football,ok for today i think is sufficent mistake in english Language,nice day for all
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My short story
Hello, my name is Mimmo. I am 49 years old but I don't think about age. I work with my brother in my paint shop. We sell paint for wood and walls. It is a very interesting job because I talk to people all day helping them select colors for a room or a study. Outside work I like to go to the gym to exercise, take walks and watch football on TV. That's it for today because I think I have made enough mistakes. Have a nice day.
Hey Mimmo! Here is another way of expressing your short story. Good luck with your studies. By the way I assume football is Soccer not American Football, correct? Al B
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ciao mimmo-- this site won't let me e-mail you -- i'd like to do a language exchange with you - you sent me a message a while ago - jonathan
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short Short stories of me myself
hello Hello,_my name is mimmo Mimmo.,_i I have am 49 years old but i I don't think at the like my age.,_i I work in my shop with my Brother brother i selling paints for wood and walls,.
It/This is a very interesting job because i I get to speak with person people all day (everyday),_for they problem of color this room is for the study which color is rather (when they have problems choosing suitable colours for their rooms),._in my private life (Apart from work,) i I like the to gym,i walk and i see watch the football,.
ok for today i think is sufficent mistake in english Language,nice day for all
(That's all for today. I think there are mistakes in my English language. Have a nice day)
A short story of myself:
Hello! My name is Mimmo and I am 49 years old but I don't act like my age. I work in my own shop with my brother selling paints for wood and walls. This is a very interesting job because I am able to speak to people everyday when they have problems choosing suitable colours for their rooms. Apart from work, I like to gym (I like gymming), take a walk and watch football.
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1. Do take not of your punncuation! I noticed there are no fullstops in your sentences. When you write 2 sentences, you put a comma ---> ,
But when you end the sentence, you have to put a fullstop ----> .
2. After every fullstop, the next letter is a captial letter
3. I is always in captital when talking about yourself (e.g.: I am, I like)
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