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A few days ago, I cried in while I was reading a book, because I got remembered of my son who had a part time job at the gas station on during the winter vacation whan when he was a college student. he He wanted to make some money before joined joining the army. One day after payday, it was payday I saw him who counting some money with his dirty hands, a dirty face and in a dirty uniform. At that time I was felt so sad and sorry.

Newsdays (Nowadays) he is very hardworking and has saved a lot of money to buy a new apartment. Besides, he knows how to spend and how to save money.

And these days I can see many young people who spending much a lot of money to buy only famous branded goods (branded products).,_so This is why they need to have a_part time jop job that will teach them how to handle money (... part time job to allow them learn how to handle money) .

I know they naver never have free time, but who have to worke work for the experience. Thak Thank you for listening.

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