Last past Weekend

This past weekend, I went to New Orleans for traveling. Me and my friend drove 8 hours to get there. it's It was kind of tiresome for us. On the first day of our arrival, we went to French Quarter, it's a very special street which is old but unique. I saw a lot of very neat street performances, it was very neat. We stayed at India Hostel. that It was my first time to live living in a hostel. It’s was not very clean, and I also saw a cockroach appear in my room. It was thought it’s crazy. At That night, we had a dinner at ACME, the most where I had the freshest oysters I ever had ;they were really delicious. While we walked on Bourbon Street, we saw a lot of people throwing the beads from balcony to the people on the street, I don’t know why. I think maybe it’s some traditional festival day. The next day, we went to on a swamp tour. Originally, we wanted to see the alligators, but the temperature on that day is was a little cold, so they didn’t show up, I’m I was kind of disappointed, but I still got to see some a good view of the swamp. At That night, we saw a jazz performance at a place called Reservation Hall. That’s a very small room, so I can fell the music very good It was a very small room, so I was able to hear the music well. For me, I really liked the music, especially the piano, so I’m very enjoy that moment. We really had a good time at that city. We got a chance to eat some good food, such as we also eat a dessert called Beignet, which is very famous there. It was very crowded at that store; people from everywhere just wanting to eat it were queuing in line. I thought it was but I think it’s just ok, pretty much like similar to a food in Taiwan called 雙胞胎, so I really realized which made me realize that Asia is a heaven full of good food.

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Last past weekend

This past weekend, I went to ( you can replace this with : I traveled to..)New Orleans. for traveling. Me and My friend and I drove 8 hours to our destination and it was there, kind of tiresome for us. On the first day of our arrival, we went to The French Quarter (Nouns and names always have to be capitalized) , it's which is a very special street and even though it is old, it is but unique. I saw a lot of street performances, it was and they were very neat.

We stayed at the India hostel. that It was my first time to live stay in a hostel. it’s It was not very clean and I also saw a cockroach appear in my room! I thought that it was it’s crazy. At that night, we had a dinner at ACME, the most fresh freshest oyster I have ever had. It was really delicious.

We walked on down the Bourbon Street and , we saw a lot of people throwing the beads from the balcony to at the people standing on the street. I don’t know why though, I think maybe it’s some sort of tradition. al festival day.

On the next day, we went to a swamp tour. Originally, we wanted to see the alligator but the temperature on that day is was a little cold, so therefore they didn’t show up. I’m was kind of disappointed, but I still got to see some good views of the swamp. At that night we saw a jazz performance at a place called the Reservation Hall. That’s a very small room (Or you could say : The palce was small...) , so I can Could  fell hear or feel the music very well. good.For me,  Personally, I really like music, especially piano, so I’m was really very enjoying that moment.

Overall, we really had a good time at that city. We e ate some good food, such as awe also eat a dessert called Beignet, which is very famous there. It was very crowded at that store and people from everywhere all over were there to just want to eat it queuing in line. But I think that Beignet is just ok and is pretty much like a food in Taiwan called 雙胞胎. Therefore I have really realized that Asia is a heaven of good food. (Or you could also say : A heaven full of good food.) 

Great writing! I can definitely see improvements in your writing and I am very pleased with that. I am very happy that you had fun in New Orleans and tried out the Beignet!! We shall speak more about it tomorrow!

Greetings!

Diana.