Let me introduce myself to you. My name is Connie. I am a 12 year old girl. I am from LIGONG middle school in Beijing, China. I have many hobbies, such as reading books and playing badminton. In addition, my favorite subject is Chinese. What is more, <- [This isn't inaccurate, but it's not really necessary.] I like to eat Chinese noodles. Besides, <- [There's no reason to have this here and it doesn't really make sense in the way you've used it.] I like listening to music. I want to make more friends!

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Let me introduce myself for to you. My name is Connie. I am 12 years old girl. I am from LIGONG middle school in Beijing,China.I have many hobbies,such as reading books and playing badminton.In addition ,My favorite subject is Chinese.What is more, I like eat Chinese Noodle best.Besides, I like listening music.I want to be make more friends!