Planning the trip

Hi Guys.
Just do a great time I wrote here in the notebook of Italki. I 1) would like to tell everybody that I 2) will to visit the Tio Sam's Land on next 3) january January. I bought tickets to Los Angeles for 4)  beggining beginning of 2014, I 5)  pretend intend to visit some places like Disney, Hollywood studios and I if get 6) a time I would to visit Las Vegas too.
My flight is scheduled 7) to for 3)  February february and I hope to enjoy a lot this travel. My wife and my two sons will go together.
From now, I will write every day because I need to practice more and more my poor English.
Hugs.

1) The verb phrase "I would like..." is conjugated here so you can then follow up with the infinitive like Queria falar....

2) "will" is an auxillary verb it cannot be by itself, would in point 1 has "like" with it so do not follow with the infinitive

3) Capitalize months

4) misspelling

5) false friend, only means to tell stories that are not true and cannot be

6) a is not right here because it is not singular in this place you could use some (algun tempo)

7) preposition choice

8) "more and more" is not a native phrase, just use more 

Hi Guys.
Just do a great time I wrote here in the notebook of Italki. (Did you already have a good time or will you have a good time in the future?)  I would like tell everybody that I will to visit the Tio Sam's Land Uncle Sam's Land on next January. I bought tickets to Los Angeles for the beggining of 2014.  I pretend intend to visit some places like Disney, Hollywood studios and if I get time I would like to visit Las Vegas too.
My flight is scheduled to leave in February and I hope to enjoy a lot this travel. My wife and my two sons will go together.
From now, I will write every day because I need to practice more and more my poor English.
Hugs.

California is great!  Have fun!

Planning the trip

Hi Guys.
Just do  had a great time. I wrote here in the notebook of Italki. I would like to tell everybody that I will to visit the Tio Sam's Land on next january. I bought tickets to Los Angeles for beggining  in beginning of 2014, I pretend  planned to visit some places like Disney, Hollywood studios and I if get a time I would like to visit Las Vegas too.
My flight is scheduled to february and I hope to enjoy a lot in this travel. My wife and my two sons will go together.
From now, I will write every day because I need to practice more and more to improve my poor English.
Hugs.

I tried to correct it and all the best and happy journey for your trip