(214) I would like you to correct me if there are mistakes. Thanks!
Roberta tightly buttoned a button that had weaseled out of/in the control of his hands. And then, she looked into his eyes and, pointing her finger at him, said innocently, “So, Mr. Johnson! You have to take care of your health!”
She then paused slightly as if to emphasize and added with her sincere voice.
Please help my writing feel natural.
Thanks!^ ^
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(214) I would like you to correct me if there are mistakes. Thanks!
Roberta tightly buttoned fastened a button that had weaseled out of the control of his hands. And then, she looked into his eyes and, pointing her finger at him, said innocently, “So (normally, when I use 'so', I am either asking a question, or providing an answer to a problem) Mr. Johnson! You have to take care of your health!”
She then paused slightly as if to emphasize and added with in her sincere voice.
Please help my writing feel natural.
Thanks!^ ^
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