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I want to write clearly to be understood to native speaker one day spiritual healer saw in her past lives, then she was living in other planet, and her planet was researching many things and loved to research about other planets its like a adventure. but one day they realized they have been known many things and technology until now. so their research is just keeping like a Playing . so her planet technology team stopped their research anymore. so our Earth is keeping to make many things for developments .Travel thats used by elevator to universe or plan to make our grave to other planet or around Earth -plane. . or to removing to other lives planet. .etc.. but it is really good for our future? our choice is making decision for future. . . if i think about it , I want to keep to live here safely and peacefully Try to make sure life in Asian people.. they are trying to live with nature and life in half modern, half in nature. . we westerner can teach to them about some manner or private things for them .because some asian people need private eachother. . . .since now, how can we keep Arabian women and their family life safely when oils gone out. . well In Japan air is clear and good . we need to make clean air not just business onto other country . . just money -business don't make good future. so I'm noticing just money -future in this world won't work to our life happily anymore . . if we hold people-lots problem in this world , we must plan to have children not many . if our air is polluted by company or country ,we must make new system for clean air or environment beyond countries. if our nuclear is keeping polluting onto our Earth after using it for our children and ground. then we need to change to new way or clean energy . . so money is best society must change from now for keeping to live our happy life. in Japan is getting losing amouns of children ,but here women also need to pay many tax to country like some western country. so mostly single women feel tired to live and must keep their life to pay to country or Item or need in daily life. its cause of many stress. anyway,place where in freedom seem to need to pay even its woman . . its life is sometimes bad especially when they are sick or in some problem to live. we have many problems but our life must be kept from many polluted things. . for happy life with natures and wild animals. if we cannot choose this thing in our soul level. . i can feel we will be broken our happy future life by ourselves.

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cannot really understand it.you should start with some notes.I really cannot understand what you want to say and your points are not matching somehow.Please explain points one by one.

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