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Today's lunch I occasionally bring my lunch box to my high school. Contents of today's lunch is rice, marinated carrot, fried, and persimmon. I thought it is healthy and good taste. After I ate lunch, I participated a committee which I belongs to. Teacher told us some information. She said, "You have to tell this information to your classmate at the time of homeroom." At the time of homeroom, I told in front of everyone.

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Today's lunch

 

I occasionally bring my lunch box to my high school. Contents of today's lunch is are rice, marinated carrot, fried (<="fried"って "French Fries"ですか。), and persimmon. I thought think it is healthy and good taste tastes good / tasty.

After I ate/had my lunch, I participated in a committee which I belongs to. Our teacher told us some information. She said, "You have to tell this information to your classmates at the time of during (<="During" は日本語の「ときに」みたいです) homeroom."
At the time of During homeroom, I told the information in front of everyone.

 

*英語はすごいですよ!でもね、「information」と「homeroom」は何でしょうか?ときどき、ノートは英語で書いたり日本語でも書いてくださいね!(<=ぼくの日本語がへんですね!Sometimes, try writing your notes in Japanese too. This way others willl be able to understand you better.)

がんばってね。またこんど。(^_^)

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Today's lunch

I occasionally bring my lunch box to my high school. Contents of today's lunch is rice, marinated carrot, fried, and persimmon. I thought it is healthy and good taste.

After I ate had (more formal) lunch, I participated in a committee which I belong (with out S) to. A Teacher told us some information; She said, "You have to tell this information to your classmates at the time of homeroom."
At the time of homeroom, I said it in front of everyone.

 

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あっ!まちがった!「あゆみさん、おへんじをありがとう!」です!
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あゆみさんお、へんじをありがとう!「ホームルーム」のついて教えてくれてありがとう。新しい言葉が勉強になりました。また、「before and after the class」と言うことができます 。はい、ノートは英語と日本語で同時に書けばいいだと思います。もう一度、日本語がおかしかったらごめんなさいね!これからも頑張ってね。 ^_^
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お二方とも、訂正をしてくださってありがとうございます。 dreamland340さん 先生から伝えるよう言われた情報は、他愛もないことでしたし、どうやってそれを表現したら良いかわからなかったので、あえて書書きませんでした。 rjcorrayaさん fried=唐揚げ information=情報(dreamland340さんへのコメントに詳しく書きました。) homeroom=ホームルーム (毎日の学校生活の、始めと終わりに設けられた時間のこと。主に、担任の先生が生徒に必要事項を連絡をする時間。) です。 より良い表現がありましたら、ぜひ教えてください。 これまで書き留めた3つのノート全てが英語だけでした。しかし日本語で一言付け加えをするのも、必要かもしれませんね。

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