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Today's lunch
I occasionally bring my lunch box to my high school. Contents of today's lunch is are rice, marinated carrot, fried (<="fried"って "French Fries"ですか。), and persimmon. I thought think it is healthy and good taste tastes good / tasty.
After I ate/had my lunch, I participated in a committee which I belongs to. Our teacher told us some information. She said, "You have to tell this information to your classmates at the time of during (<="During" は日本語の「ときに」みたいです) homeroom."
At the time of During homeroom, I told the information in front of everyone.
*英語はすごいですよ!でもね、「information」と「homeroom」は何でしょうか?ときどき、ノートは英語で書いたり日本語でも書いてくださいね!(<=ぼくの日本語がへんですね!Sometimes, try writing your notes in Japanese too. This way others willl be able to understand you better.)
がんばってね。またこんど。(^_^)
Today's lunch
I occasionally bring my lunch box to my high school. Contents of today's lunch is rice, marinated carrot, fried, and persimmon. I thought it is healthy and good taste.
After I ate had (more formal) lunch, I participated in a committee which I belong (with out S) to. A Teacher told us some information; She said, "You have to tell this information to your classmates at the time of homeroom."
At the time of homeroom, I said it in front of everyone.
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