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The Dream
I don't have any special topic to write so I am gonna try to make up something. I helped to an old wolf with a Spanish text about something similar and I guess it's a good idea to improve my English and write as many new words as possible. Yep, I know this could be a little bit difficult for you to correct and give some advice but anyway, I am going to write as American as I can, jajaja XD
Once upon a time, when the sky was shining like a candle in the middle of the night (it is called a "simile" to use the word like to compare two different, but similar in idea, things in writing) it all started. I was sleeping as if it was my last day (there is another thing in writing where you use "as if" to connect two things, but I don't remember what that is called), I mean, like a baby. I started dreaming about my friends, my classmates and all people who have been important throughout my life, and when it was done, I thought I was in the US. I cannot remember all things I saw but I do remember a few ones, such as: a big building, it was the biggest one I have ever seen, I also saw five, six or maybe seven cars, which had the same color (they were bluish).
When I turned my head a little to my right, I saw something unbelievable, I glanced all around me and I didn't see any crack (in the sidewalk or the building or what?). I tried to find at least only one but I gave up. After that, I called a taxi and when the driver asked me: young one, ¿a donde quieres ir? I just asked to myself: Is this man from Colombia? well, I was amazed 'cause that man pronounced that question perfectly, so I was about to answer him in Spanish: Quiero ir a un hotel, but I just didn't because I didn't want to mess up the dream. Instead, I answered him loud and clearly: Sir, Are ya from Columbia?, after I said Columbia, he changed his face, yep, he smiled and with a big smile (so big that It was hard for me to find his eyes). ..
This story will continue in the next chapter.
Very interesting! I can't wait for the next chapter...
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