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Life in Chad (3)—— LERE Lake You may not know this little lake named "LERE", but it's really hard to believe that there's a such sweet lake in Chad, except Chad Lake. With a journey of 2 hours long and a bumpy ride, I arrived at this "pictureresque" zone, in fact, this wild zone.(The majority of this country is undeveloped). The resident near this lake live by the fishing. But with the increasing of the consumption of fishes, this barren lake is walking foward the "death". I have to admit that, the access of the foreign companys to this country makes the market for the fishery, but the source of fishes here is not far enough for the consumption. (I consulted the dictionary for this writing, but I can't still well express what I wanna say. I think the problem is the shortage of the reading......)

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Life in Chad (3)—— Lake Lere

You may not have heard of this little lake named "LERE", but it's really hard to believe that there's a such sweet lake in Chad, except Lake Chad. After a 2 hour long journey on a bumpy road, I arrived at this "picturesque" zone. In fact, this is a wild zone. (The majority of this country is undeveloped.) The residents near this lake make a living by the fishing. But with the increasing of the consumption of fishes, this lake is headed for walking foward the barren "death." I have to admit that, The presence of the foreign companys in this country supports the fishing industry, but the demand for fish far outweighs the supply.  

 

In proper place names, "Lake" usually comes before the name, but sometimes after.  It's "Lake Chad" but also "Great Salt Lake" in Utah.  I'm not sure why there is a variation.

"Bumpy ride" is a correct phrase but it didn't fit into the sentence well so I changed it to "bumpy road" which implies that the ride was bumpy!

 

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