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My english class I have to write an essay for my class and I have made a draft that I would be very glad if any of you can check it out! Thanks! The heavy traffic it is a stressful and sometimes a dangerous problem in all Mexico, but specially here in Mexico City where exists a lot of cars. Particulary, I am going to talk about Mexico City's downtown, a very crowded place with narrow streets to walk in and so many cars circulating. For this reason I would like to talk about the pros and cons of a great solution: Banning the cars from downtown. To begin with I have to say (as I said before) that downtown it is a crowded place and banning cars could be very helpful for all the people that have to walk on those streets because this will prevent a lot of car accidents. Secondly, for the people that drives maybe this solution could bother them but they could benefit from it because in downtown it is very difficult to find a place to park your car and if by any chance you find a secure parking lot you will have to pay about $50 pesos for a few hours beside this there are no inssurance in this kind of places so if something happens to your car in most cases they will not take the responsability for it, so with this solution drivers could save a lot of money. Last but not least, applying this solution the downtown will be more attractive because all the people and most important, tourists will have the opportunity to stroll freely all around the beautiful streets of our downtown. However, this solution it is not perfect and some people could be affected instead of benefit from this. As we all know the streets are full of shops and their distributors need to carry mercancy to the shops in any hour of the day so for this they often need transportation trucks to enter in the crowded streets. It is because of this that people that owns a shop in downtown would be affected by this solution. But to solve this we could present a second solution: Allow to enter this transportation trucks only by the night (around 3 or 4 am) when there are not so many people wandering in the streets and in this way nobody will result affected of this inniciative. To conclude I would like to say that there are more pros that I did not mention in here but you have already seen it in the only street in downtown where the cars are no longer allowed to enter: Madero Street. I invite you to go to that street and live the experience of walking freely all along that street without the noisy and problematic

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My english class

I have to write an essay for my class and I have made a draft that I would be very glad if any of you can check it out! Thanks!

The heavy traffic it is a stressful and sometimes a dangerous problem in all Mexico, but especially here in Mexico City, where exists a lot of cars exist.
In particular, I am going to talk about Mexico City's downtown, a very crowded place with narrow streets to walk in and so many cars circulating. For this reason I would like to talk about the pros and cons of a great solution: Banning the cars from downtown.
To begin with, I have to say (as I said before) that downtown it is a crowded place and banning cars could be very helpful for all the people that have to walk on those streets because this will prevent a lot of car accidents.
Secondly, for the people that drive, maybe this solution could bother them, but they could benefit from it because in downtown it is very difficult to find a place to park your car. If by any chance you find a secure parking lot, you will have to pay about $50 pesos for a few hours. Besides this, there are no insurance in this kind of places, so if something happens to your car, in most cases they will not take the responsibility for it, so with this solution drivers could save a lot of money.
Last, but not least, applying this solution the downtown will be more attractive, because all the people, and most important, tourists will have the opportunity to stroll freely all around the beautiful streets of our downtown.

However, this solution it is not perfect and some people could be adversely affected instead of benefiting from this. As we all know, the streets are full of shops and their distributors need to carry merchandise to the shops in any hour of the day so for this they often need transport trucks to enter in the crowded streets. It is because of this that people that own a shop in downtown would be affected by this solution.
But to solve this we could present a second solution: Allow to enter this transport trucks only by the night (around 3 or 4 am) when there are not so many people wandering in the streets and in this way nobody will result be affected  by this initiative.

To conclude, I would like to say that there are more pros that I did not mention in here, but you have already seen it in the only street in downtown where the cars are no longer allowed to enter: Madero Street.
I invite you to go to that street and live the experience of walking freely all along that street without the noise and problems.

 

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