What  How have I Changed Compared to The Year Before ?

One year ago, I was just learning practicing English very hard everyday, even though I would be very tired after work. I'm very tired, I would still go went to cram school(or attend class?)  to improve my English and to become fluent in it. to gain my ability of language, Since I passed my English test, I came to America, for free, ( you can also say 'at no cost') 

Well... not exactly. really, I still have spent a lot of money for to travel ing, but that's what I want to do. I like traveling everywhere. When I was in Taiwan, I'm not I was not very focused on my interest, because I just had to focus on learning English. I thought if I'm not grab I don't take this opportunity to go abroad, I'll regret it a lot . So eversince I'm have moved here, I have decided to learn better things.  Things that are not only for the language related, but are also  related to my social life and interaction with other people. my human relationship,

I am sometimes I'm too self-centered and I am  awared of that. Therefore, I need to improve control my temper also, because  and since in this society everyone needs somebody's help, even though you're very strong or talented of something, you still can't live ing by yourself and be that's too lonely. 

I'm very happy of thatI have a lot of friends,even though sometimes I don't have a good temper. but I'll I wouldh have to think about it and realize that maybe I'm could be wrong sometimes. so That's a big decision for me to make in my mind. Now, I'm still learning gaining some skills while repairing my helicopter. I think that I  really need to gain a lot of knowledge regarding the helicopters. of it,

I hope that in the future, I'll be a big tree of knowledge so that I could be a big trees to teach somebody else. That's what I want to do: learning new things and making improvements everyday!!! 

Good writing! I'm glad you did your homework and worked on your writing!!! We'll discuss the problems in class! Again, you are a diligent student and I am sure your writing keeps getting better and better as you write!

Diana.