The Modern Family

I'm watching an American TV play show called The "Modern Family." I like Gloria very much. She is so beautiful ,hot and funny. And she is brave ,too. Not only is she beautiful and funny, but she is also very brave. But However, I don't like her voice or her accent. She is perfect except for her accent. On one episode, she talked to Claire's daughter and told her why she needs a dress. "I'm not beautiful like you. But that's ok. I'm the smart one," the girl said. But Gloria told her, "The cute buttons boy doesn't know that you are smart. Look, one day you are going to want to date a cute guy like that. When that day comes you are going to want to look beautiful. Then you will want a dress." Haha I like these words.what she said.

*The full stop comes at the end of the sentence, and you need to add a space after. Then, captialize the first word of the next sentence.

**When you introduce dialogue in a piece of writing (characters talking) you need to use quotation marks. For example: Maria said, "Look at that dress! I love it."

The Modern Family

I'm watching an American TV play called "The Modern Family". I like Cloria(?) very much .She is so beautiful, hot and funny. And she is brave, too! But I don't like her voice and or her accent. Apart from Except for her accent she is perfect. She talked to spoke with Claire's daughter and told her why she needs a dress. "I'm not beautiful like you. But that's ok. I'm the smart one" the girl said. But Cloria told her "The cute as buttons boy doesn't know that you are smart. Look, one day, you are going to want to date a cute guy like that. When that day comes, you are going to want to look beautiful. Then you will want a dress ." Haha I like these words.

'cute as buttons', 'cute as a button' is a pretty old idiom usually used for a young woman or child or something small and cute and adorable

Punctuation: space comes after, not before the comma, fullstop. 

The Modern Family

I'm watching an American TV play called The Modern Family . I like Cloria very much .She is so beautiful ,hot and funny.And she is brave ,too .But I don't like her vice and her accent .Except for her accent. She is perfect. She talked to Claire's daughter and told her why she needs a dress .I'm not beautiful like you. But that's ok.I'm the smart one ,The girl said. But cloria told her "The cute buttons boy doesn't know that you are smart .Look,one day,you are going to want to date a cute guy like that .When that day comes. you are going to want to look beautiful .Then you will want a dress ."Haha I like these words.