Need correction :)

Personality problems is are an interesting object ((OBJECT isn't wrong, but I think 'subject' would be a better word)) to be analyzed in these days because of so many social problems caused by unhealthy personality personalities ((It's better to have personality problemS as plural, because there are many types of personality problems)). The rise of corruption, rape, and murder are the problems that are closely related with personality problems themselves. This study is very interesting to be raised because still many people who don’t fully understand how to be a person who has a healthy personality.

Need correction :)

Personality problem(s) is are an interesting object to be analyzed in these days because of so many social problems (are caused) by unhealthy personalit(ies). The rise of corruption, rape, and murder are the problems that are closely related with personality problems themselves. This Study (in this area) is very interesting to be raised because still many people (still) who don’t fully understand how to be a person who has (with a) healthy personality.

Good work, just a few minor changes. Also, what we might class as a 'personality problem' is probably better described as either 1.) 'A personality disorder', or 2.) ' a mental health disorder.

Corruption is more likely 1.) a problem due to a persons personality, where as rape and murder might be more likely caused by 2.) "mental health disorders".

Hebat, keep up the good work.